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The bar chart below gives information about vehicle ownership in China.

The illustrated bar graph demonstrates the information about vehicles owned by the citizen of China. overall, it is noticed that number of people who have vehicles were increased gradually in the given period. It is clear that, in year 1947, 400 vehicles were purchased by the thousand residents of China, whereas the quantity of vehicle increased and Rose up to 800, in year 1990. moreover, 2, 000 vehicles were brought by the immigrants which was 2 times more vehicles, in year 1991. Moving further, between years 1995 and 1999, the sale of vehicles increased rapidly and 3, 000 vehicles were purchased by the citizen which was 1. 5 times more vehicles, in year 1995. After this the sales of vehicle Rose up and around 4300 vehicles were owned by the inhabitants of China.
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vehicles
were increased
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1947, 400
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were
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purchased
by the thousand residents of China, whereas the quantity of
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vehicle
increased and Rose up to 800, in
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1990.
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moreover
, 2, 000
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vehicles
were brought
by the immigrants which was 2 times more
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, in
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1991. Moving
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, between years 1995 and 1999, the sale of
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vehicles
increased
rapidly
and 3, 000
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vehicles
were
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purchased
by the citizen which was 1. 5 times more
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vehicles
, in
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1995. After this the sales of
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Rose up and around 4300
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IELTS academic The bar chart below gives information about vehicle ownership in China.

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133 words
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