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The 2 maps illustrate several renovation in Colwick Arts Center in 2005 and today. It is obvious that there are striking differences presented in both indoor and outdoor exhibition areas

The 2 maps illustrate several renovation in Colwick Arts Center in 2005 and today. It is obvious that there are striking differences presented in both indoor and outdoor exhibition areas K3oWw
The 2 maps illustrate several renovation in Colwick Arts Center in 2005 and today. It is obvious that there are striking differences presented in both indoor and outdoor exhibition areas. In terms of inside zone, over the period, extended buildings bring about extra facilities as well as additional choices for attenders of Arts Center. Firstly, the concert hall and cinema are separated into 2 adjacent blocks which occupy virtually the east of central area. In addition, the meeting room is in the similar case, which is split into 2 nearby rooms and relocated into the upper left-hand part of indoor area. Otherwise, 2 galleries were merged and moved to the opposite site. Finally, information desk seems to be the only thing remaining unchanged as the time goes on. In reference to outside one, the conspicuous information is the presence of brand-new stage which is surrounded by plenty of lively trees. Over the time period, wasteland was spectacularly converted into green spacious grass where audiences could take a seat on available desks and enjoy compelling performances on the stage.
The 2 maps illustrate several renovation in Colwick Arts Center in 2005 and
today
. It is obvious that there are striking differences presented in both indoor and outdoor exhibition areas.

In terms of inside zone, over the period, extended buildings bring about extra facilities
as well
as additional choices for attenders of Arts Center.
Firstly
, the concert hall and cinema
are separated
into 2 adjacent blocks which occupy
virtually
the east of central area.
In addition
, the meeting room is in the similar case, which
is split
into 2 nearby rooms and relocated into the upper
left
-hand part of indoor area.
Otherwise
, 2 galleries
were merged
and
moved
to the opposite site.
Finally
, information desk seems to be the
only
thing remaining unchanged as the time goes on.

In reference to outside one, the conspicuous information is the presence of brand-new stage which
is surrounded
by
plenty
of lively trees. Over the time period, wasteland was
spectacularly
converted into green spacious grass where audiences could take a seat on available desks and enjoy compelling performances on the stage.
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IELTS academic The 2 maps illustrate several renovation in Colwick Arts Center in 2005 and today. It is obvious that there are striking differences presented in both indoor and outdoor exhibition areas

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