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ten provinces in Thailand that people got the most shots of vaccines.

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The bar graph from the Public Health Ministry shows ten provinces in Thailand that people got the most shots of vaccines. The data shows that Bangkok had the highest number of people who got the first shot of vaccines, while Chiang Mai had the lowest. In Phuket, 96, 929 and 92, 790 people already got the first and the second shots, which were too close to each other. The graph further shows that the number of people in Samut Sakhon, Tak, Surat Thani, Nonthaburi, Chonburi, Samut Prakan and Pathum Thani was 115169, 46029, 33210, 35630, 35786, 30046, 25320 and 20807 people already got the first shot of vaccines respectively. For the second shot, people in Phuket got the most shots of vaccines at 92, 790 people, while people in Pathum Thani got the least at 5, 924 people. The number of people who got the second shot in Bangkok was 74, 800 people which was the farthest from the first shot when compared with other provinces. The graph also shows that 64, 292 people in Samut Sakhon, 23, 633 people in Tak, 25, 404 people in Surat Thani, 14, 738 people in Nonthaburi, 13, 178 people in Chonburi, 16, 226 people in Samut Prakan and 6, 911 people in Chiang Mai had already got the second shot of vaccine.
The bar graph from the Public Health Ministry
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