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The table gives information about television viewing figures for different kinds of sports of four nations. Overall, the USA ranks first in terms of having the most number of people watching sports on TV. Especially, tennis is the most popular sport in all four countries. As can be seen from the table, the USA is the country with the largest number of people watching tennis and golf, while the Canada and the UK have the lowest viewer is just about 6, 1 and 2, 8 million watchers respectively. Beside, motor racing is the least popular of all sports but in the UK this sports reaches the highest views with 6, 4 million people. In Canada it seems that they don’t like this extreme sport very much so there are only 1, 1 million this country. Turning to the atheletics, Australian doesn’t like watching this sports on TV with only 3 million viewer and Americans watch this sports the most with 5 million people.
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in all four countries.

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from the table, the USA is the country with the largest number of
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watching tennis and golf, while the Canada and the UK have the lowest viewer is
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about 6, 1 and 2, 8
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in the UK this
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reaches the highest views with 6, 4
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IELTS academic television viewing figure

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