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task 1 two maps of access to a hospital city in 2007 and 2010

task 1 two maps of access to a hospital city in 2007 and 2010 gbB3l
the twon maps demonstrates the road entrances to the hospital of the xity in 2007 and 2010 and the modofications that have been done. from the first glance there is roundabout south the city road in 2010 instead of across roads in 2007. the car park was seprated into two, staff car park south west the hospital road and the other park east the city hospital intead of ine park south the hospital road in 2007. one great bus station area located south west th hospital connected with the two roundabout in hospital road instead of multiple bus stops west and east the hospital in 2007.
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the
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twon
maps demonstrates the
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road
entrances to the
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hospital
of the
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xity
in 2007 and 2010 and the
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modofications
that have
been done
.

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from
the
first
glance there is roundabout south the city
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road
in 2010
instead
of across
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roads
in 2007.
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the
car
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park
was
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seprated
into two, staff car
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park
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south west
the
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hospital
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road
and the other
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park
east the city
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hospital
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intead
of
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ine
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park
south the
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hospital
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road
in 2007.

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one
great bus station area located
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south west
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th
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hospital
connected with the two roundabout in
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hospital
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road
instead
of multiple bus
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stops
west and east the
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hospital
in 2007.
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IELTS academic task 1 two maps of access to a hospital city in 2007 and 2010

Academic
  American English
3 paragraphs
106 words
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text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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