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Task 1. The process gives information how to recycle the aluminium bottle.

Task 1. The process gives information how to recycle the aluminium bottle. GL0Mx
The diagram indicates information the way in which to used again the aluminium bottle. It is clear that, prior to the actual processing of the recycles, it is first necessary for the bottlers to collect them from consumers and it that there are six main phases involved. In the first stage of the process tge again used agains are congrated in the collection from used cans. At this point, the used cans are passed out consecutively phase a which are in the cleaning, sorting, shredding and compressing. Following this, the used cans heating and melting by which specific caldron. Body 2. The second stage of rhe recycling prcess, meanwhile, after heating and melting it turns on the thing is ready the rolling 2. 5 mm-6 mm thick and from rolling is fabricated recyclings. As for the plastic parts, it reprocess of these into reusing 74% recycled in the U. K
The diagram indicates information the way in which to
used
again the
aluminium
bottle.

It is
clear
that, prior to the actual processing of the recycles, it is
first
necessary for the bottlers to collect them from consumers and it that there are six main phases involved.

In the
first
stage of the process
tge
again
used
agains
are
congrated
in the collection from
used
cans. At this point, the
used
cans
are passed
out
consecutively
phase a which are in the cleaning, sorting, shredding and compressing. Following this, the
used
cans heating and melting by which specific
caldron
.

Body 2.

The second stage of
rhe
recycling
prcess
, meanwhile, after heating and melting it turns on the thing is ready the rolling 2. 5 mm-6 mm thick and from rolling
is fabricated
recyclings
. As for the plastic parts, it
reprocess
of these into reusing 74% recycled in the U.
K
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IELTS academic Task 1. The process gives information how to recycle the aluminium bottle.

Academic
  American English
5 paragraphs
149 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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