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Percentage of Water Used for Different Purposes in Six Areas of the World

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The pie charts compare industrial, agricultural and domestic use of water in six regions of worldwide. It is clear that in most of areas the main proportion of water used for agricultural, while in Europe and North America industrial use is more. It is noticeable that in 3 region only less than a quarter of whole amount of water used for industry and domestic. In Africa, Central Asia, South East Asia and South America the proportion of agricultural use of water are 84%, 88%, 81% and 71% respectively which is a major using compare to other proportion. On the contrary, industrial use accounted for the highest proportion of North America with 48% and Europe with 53%. In Africa, Europe, Central and South East Asia, South and North America total of industrial and domestic are roughly 16%, while the equivalent figure in South America is 29%. Also, the second highest purpose of using water in North America and Europe are 32% and 39% respectively.
The pie charts compare
industrial
, agricultural and domestic
use
of
water
in six regions of worldwide.

It is
clear
that in
most of areas
the main
proportion
of
water
used
for agricultural, while in Europe and
North
America
industrial
use
is more. It is noticeable that in 3
region
only
less than a quarter of whole amount of
water
used
for industry and domestic.

In Africa, Central Asia, South East Asia and South America the
proportion
of agricultural
use
of
water
are 84%, 88%, 81% and 71%
respectively
which is a major using compare to other
proportion
.
On the contrary
,
industrial
use
accounted for the highest
proportion
of
North
America with 48% and Europe with 53%.

In Africa, Europe, Central and South East Asia, South and
North
America total of
industrial
and domestic are roughly 16%, while the equivalent figure in South America is 29%.
Also
, the second highest purpose of using
water
in
North
America and Europe are 32% and 39%
respectively
.
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IELTS academic Percentage of Water Used for Different Purposes in Six Areas of the World

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