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Percentage of Water Used for Different Purposes in Six Areas of the World

Percentage of Water Used for Different Purposes in Six Areas of the World 2Kqrx

The pie charts compare industrial, agricultural and domestic use of water in six regions of worldwide. It is clear that in most of areas the main proportion of water used for agricultural, while in Europe and North America industrial use is more. It is noticeable that in 3 region only less than a quarter of whole amount of water used for industry and domestic. In Africa, Central Asia, South East Asia and South America the proportion of agricultural use of water are 84%, 88%, 81% and 71% respectively which is a major using compare to other proportion. On the contrary, industrial use accounted for the highest proportion of North America with 48% and Europe with 53%. In Africa, Europe, Central and South East Asia, South and North America total of industrial and domestic are roughly 16%, while the equivalent figure in South America is 29%. Also, the second highest purpose of using water in North America and Europe are 32% and 39% respectively.

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