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task 1 the change in percentage of population

task 1 the change in percentage of population Yk2wn

Given in the table is how many citizens aged 65+, according to three different countries, over the course of 52 years, commencing from 1988 and predictions until 3020. Overall, an upward tendency can be seen in Canada, Germany and the UK. Another key feature is that Germany accounts for the majority of the 65s and over out of the countries examined. At the outset of the survey, the proportion of the 65+ year-old population of Germany registered about 20%, ranked first among the countries examined. This figure is predicted to rise to exactly 30% by 2030. A similar upswing trend is seen in elderly people in Canada, with figures initially climbing from shy of 16% to above 20% before increasing to north of 26% by the end of the survey. At first, those aged 65+ in the UK peaked at 10% in 1988 before being projected to rise slightly to roughly 15%. This data is forecast to climb to 20% by the end.

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Given
 in the table is how This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 citizens aged 65+, according to three This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 countries, over the course of 52 years, commencing from 1988 and predictions until 3020.

Overall
, an upward tendency can be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 in Canada, Germany and the UK. Another key feature is that Germany accounts for the majority of the 65s and over out of the countries examined.

At the outset of the survey, the proportion of the 65+ year-This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
 population of Germany registered about 20%, ranked first
 among the countries examined. This figure is predicted
 to rise to exactly 30% by 2030. A similar upswing trend is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 in elderly This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 in Canada, with figures initially
 climbing from shy of 16% to above 20% This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 increasing to north of 26% by the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 of the survey.

At first
, those aged 65+ in the UK peaked at 10% in 1988 This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
being projected
 to rise slightly
 to roughly 15%. This data is forecast to climb to 20% by the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
. 