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Task 1 : compare student room for 2 people with student room for one people

Task 1: compare student room for 2 people with student room for one people wOxBd
The two maps show the differences between a student room for two people and a student room for one person at an Australian university. In general, it is clear from the diagrams that the cost of a student room for two people is expensive than this one for one person. Moreover, a two students' room has more area room than that for one person. Room for one student costs $200 per week. This room has 15 square meters, including 6 meters in length and 2. 5 meters in width. There is a television in the south of the room and opposite is a study desk. In addition, there are still more other instruments next to the TV consisting of a sink, a stove, and a microwave separately from left to right. This room has a bathroom and a bed with windows side by side. Double rooms have nearly two times the cost of a single room, and their prices are $350 per week, including 24 square meters. This room has almost all devices in the single room, also concluding of a TV, a sink, a stove, a microwave, and a bathroom. Furthermore, it has a table and chairs on the left of two cupboards. This room is for two students, therefore, it has two beds and two study desks and one bookshelf next to the study desk 1.
The two maps
show
the differences between a
student
room
for two
people
and a
student
room
for one person at an Australian university.

In general
, it is
clear
from the diagrams that the cost of a
student
room
for two
people
is
expensive
than this one for one person.
Moreover
, a two students'
room
has more area
room
than that for one person.

Room for one
student
costs $200 per week. This
room
has 15 square
meters
, including 6
meters
in length and 2. 5
meters
in width. There is a television in the south of the
room
and opposite is a study desk.
In addition
, there are
still
more other instruments
next
to the TV consisting of a sink, a stove, and a microwave
separately
from
left
to right. This
room
has a bathroom and a bed with windows side by side.

Double
rooms
have
nearly
two times the cost of a single
room
, and their prices are $350 per week, including 24 square
meters
. This
room
has almost all devices in the single
room
,
also
concluding of a TV, a sink, a stove, a microwave, and a bathroom.
Furthermore
, it has a table and chairs on the
left
of two cupboards. This
room
is for two
students
,
therefore
, it has two beds and two study desks and one bookshelf
next
to the study desk 1.
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IELTS academic Task 1: compare student room for 2 people with student room for one people

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
228 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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