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Task 1 bar graph population live in urban areas

Task 1 bar graph population live in urban areas x8b1y

Academic writing task 1The give pie chart demonstrate statistics about the 25 to 35 age group who qualified from post school by range a different form of education, humanities, nursing, others and so on examining scrupulously, the maximum percent of adult who took degree in social science, arts. which was 20%while the minimum propotion of 25 to 35 age group took degree in other fields. accounting to 2%. the percentage of administration stood at19%as against 18%in science, maths and computer field. scrutinising the details ahead, decrepancy of2%can be seen in case of the ratio of humanities who took degree, amounting for 4%and6% in MBA degree. With a margin of 2%increased to 9%in engeering study from 7% nursing degree. Overall, the top slot was taken by the percentage of 25 to 35 age group who took degree in social, science, arts while adults didnot take degree in other fields.

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