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Task 1 bar graph population live in urban areas

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Academic writing task 1The give pie chart demonstrate statistics about the 25 to 35 age group who qualified from post school by range a different form of education, humanities, nursing, others and so on examining scrupulously, the maximum percent of adult who took degree in social science, arts. which was 20%while the minimum propotion of 25 to 35 age group took degree in other fields. accounting to 2%. the percentage of administration stood at19%as against 18%in science, maths and computer field. scrutinising the details ahead, decrepancy of2%can be seen in case of the ratio of humanities who took degree, amounting for 4%and6% in MBA degree. With a margin of 2%increased to 9%in engeering study from 7% nursing degree. Overall, the top slot was taken by the percentage of 25 to 35 age group who took degree in social, science, arts while adults didnot take degree in other fields.
Academic writing task 1The give pie chart demonstrate statistics about the 25 to 35 age group
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on examining
scrupulously
, the maximum percent of adult
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took
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degree
in social science, arts.
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which
was 20%while the minimum
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propotion
of 25 to 35 age group
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took
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degree
in other fields.
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accounting
to 2%.
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the
percentage of administration stood at19%as against 18%in science,
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maths
and computer field.
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scrutinising
the
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details
ahead,
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decrepancy
of2%can be
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seen
in case of the ratio of humanities
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who
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took
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degree
, amounting for 4%and6% in MBA
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degree
. With a margin of 2%increased to 9%in
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engeering
study from 7% nursing
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degree
.
Overall
, the top slot
was taken
by the percentage of 25 to 35 age group
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who
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took
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degree
in social, science, arts while adults
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didnot
take
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IELTS academic Task 1 bar graph population live in urban areas

Academic
  American English
1 paragraphs
148 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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