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survey of coffee and tea buying and drinking habits of people in five Australian cities over the past four weeks.

survey of coffee and tea buying and drinking habits of people in five Australian cities over the past four weeks. ORnKM

The chart illustrates the outcomes of a survey about coffee and tea buying and drinking habits of residents in five Australian cities in last four weeks. Regarding “bought fresh coffee”, the least common in three choices, Sydney has the largest figure (almost 45%), followed by Melbourne (over 40%). This percentage in Hobart constitutes about 38% and slightly higher than both Adelaide and Brisbane whose proportions are familiar, about 38%. On the other hand, the second most popular option is “bought instant coffee”. This percentage in Hobart and Brisbane is almost the same, which occupies about 55%. While in both Melbourne and Adelaide, people who bought instant coffee comprise almost 50%, only 45% of Sydney dwellers consumed instant coffee. However, “went to a cafe” for coffee or tea is the favourite of Sydney, Hobart and Melbourne dwellers, which makes this percentage of the three cities merely different, about 64%. Whereas, in Brisbane, only 55% of citizens chose to go to a cafe for coffee or tea, which is 5% higher than that in Adelaide. In conclusion, the proportion of people who went to a cafe to drink coffee or tea in last four weeks is the highest in three categories since it exceeds others in almost five cities. On the contrary, the percentage of residents buying fresh coffee is in the lowest position.

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