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The two pie charts reveals six main reason for immigration and emigration respectively occuring within the UK in the year 2007.

The two pie charts reveals six main reason for immigration and emigration respectively occuring within the UK in the year 2007. ldq6K
The two pie charts reveals six main reason for immigration and emigration respectively occuring within the UK in the year 2007. Overall, for the first chart definite job was the largest part, while no reason stated was the least significant part of the immgration. Although the reason for definiting job still made up the beggest part of the emigration chart, the smallest sigment was formal study there. The sigments with the most differences are represented by looking for work, no reason stated and formal study for. People who are looking for a work in Britain accounted for 12% for immigration chart, on the other date provided we can clearly see that this segment is estimated at 22 per cent. The number of immigrants who have no reason in particular made up 6%, whereas for emigration this amount was thrice greater or 18%. Apperently, formal study cause for moving abroad accounted for 4%, whilst for immigrantion chart it equals 26 per cent in 2007. The left parts are approximately similar to each other but with some differences in numbers such as definite job, accompany/join and sigment labeled ‘other’. 1% less, 2% less and 3% greater, respectively, for each of them comparing the first chart with another one.
The two pie
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reveals six main
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reason
for immigration and emigration
respectively
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occuring
within the UK in the year 2007.

Overall
, for the
first
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chart
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definite
job was the largest
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part
, while no
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reason
stated was the least significant
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part
of the
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immgration
. Although the
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reason
for
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definiting
job
still
made up the
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beggest
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part
of the emigration
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chart
, the smallest
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sigment
was formal study there.

The
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sigments
with the most differences
are represented
by looking for work, no
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reason
stated and formal study for.
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People
who are looking for a work in Britain accounted for 12% for immigration
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chart
, on the other date provided we can
clearly
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see
that this segment
is estimated
at 22 per cent. The number of immigrants who have no
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reason
in particular
made up 6%, whereas for emigration this amount was thrice greater or 18%.
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Apperently
, formal study cause for moving abroad accounted for 4%, whilst for
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immigrantion
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chart
it equals 26 per cent in 2007.

The
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left
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parts
are approximately similar to each other
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but
with
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some
differences in numbers such as
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definite
job, accompany/
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join
and
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sigment
labeled ‘other’. 1% less, 2% less and 3% greater,
respectively
, for each of them comparing the
first
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chart
with another one.
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IELTS academic The two pie charts reveals six main reason for immigration and emigration respectively occuring within the UK in the year 2007.

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6.0
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