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THE CHART BELOW SHOW THE INFORMATIONON THE PERCENTAGE OF BRITISH PEOPLE GIVING MONEY TO CHARITY BY AGE RANGE FOR TH YEARS 1990 AND 2010.

THE CHART BELOW SHOW THE INFORMATIONON THE PERCENTAGE OF BRITISH PEOPLE GIVING MONEY TO CHARITY BY AGE RANGE FOR TH YEARS 1990 AND 2010. LbWb8
THE PROVIDED BAR CHART ILLUSTRATES THE PROPROTION OF BRITISHERS DONATING FROM WAGES TO CHARITY BY VARIOU AGE GROUPS IN 1990 AND 2010. OVERALL, IN FORMER YEAR THE HIGHEST AMOUNT DONATED BY MIDDLE AGE INDIVIDUALS WHEREAS, IN LATTER PERIOD IT IS BY 51-65 YEAR OLD PEOPLE. IT CAN BE CLEARLY SEEN THAT, IN 1990, FUNDS DONATED BY THE PEOPLE FROM 18 TO 25 IS ACCOUNTED FOR NEAR 17%, WHICH PLUMMET TO AROUND 8% IN TWO DECADES SIMILARLY, THE CIVILIAN (26-35) DONATES MERELY ABOVE 30% WHICH, FALLS BY 9%. THE CITIZENS IN MIDDLE AGED (36-50) IS THE HIGHEST AMOUNT PROVIDED AS CHARITY AT APPROXIMATELY 42% AND IT SLIGHTLY DROPS TO 35% IN 2010. THE BAR CHART FURTEHR COLLATE THAT, IN FIRST SPAN, THE CITIZENS IN THEIR EARLY FIFTIES TO MID-SIXTIES DONATED EXACTLY 35%, WHICH ROSES BY 5% IN FINAL PERIOD LIKEWISE, THE AGED POPULANCE PROVIDES NEAR ONE THIRD TO CHARITY AND IT NEGLIGIBLY INCREASES IN TWENTY YEARS.
THE PROVIDED BAR CHART ILLUSTRATES THE
PROPROTION
OF BRITISHERS DONATING FROM WAGES TO CHARITY BY
VARIOU
AGE GROUPS IN 1990 AND 2010.

OVERALL
, IN FORMER YEAR THE HIGHEST AMOUNT DONATED BY MIDDLE AGE INDIVIDUALS WHEREAS, IN LATTER PERIOD IT IS BY 51-65 YEAR
OLD
PEOPLE
.

IT CAN BE
CLEARLY
SEEN
THAT, IN 1990, FUNDS DONATED BY THE
PEOPLE
FROM 18 TO 25
IS ACCOUNTED
FOR NEAR 17%, WHICH PLUMMET TO AROUND 8% IN TWO DECADES
SIMILARLY
, THE CIVILIAN (26-35) DONATES
MERELY
ABOVE 30% WHICH, FALLS BY 9%. THE CITIZENS IN MIDDLE AGED (36-50) IS THE HIGHEST AMOUNT PROVIDED AS CHARITY AT APPROXIMATELY 42% AND IT
SLIGHTLY
DROPS TO 35% IN 2010.

THE BAR CHART
FURTEHR
COLLATE THAT, IN
FIRST
SPAN, THE CITIZENS IN THEIR EARLY FIFTIES TO MID-SIXTIES DONATED EXACTLY 35%, WHICH ROSES BY 5% IN FINAL PERIOD
LIKEWISE
, THE AGED
POPULANCE
PROVIDES NEAR ONE THIRD TO CHARITY AND IT
NEGLIGIBLY
INCREASES IN TWENTY YEARS.
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