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Many people think that the government should spent money to explore outer space while others believe that it is a waste money of public money

Many people think that the government should spent money to explore outer space while others believe that it is a waste money of public money nXmD2
It is worth noticing that, regarding two arguments of exploring the universe which is the responsible should be get by the government. On the other hand it would be sort of unnecessary expenses of the public fund. However, i am fully disagree with this second argument as well, the points based on following reasons. Furthermore this essay seeks to investigate of these problems and considerably solutions as possible.
It is worth noticing that, regarding two arguments of exploring the universe which is the responsible should be
Did you mean "got", "gotten"?
get
by the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
government
.
On the other hand
it would be sort of unnecessary expenses of the public fund.
However
,
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
am
fully
Consider using a past participle here: "disagreed".
disagree
with this second argument
as well
, the points based on following reasons.
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Furthermore
this essay seeks to investigate of these problems and
considerably
solutions as possible.
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IELTS academic Many people think that the government should spent money to explore outer space while others believe that it is a waste money of public money

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  American English
1 paragraphs
68 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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