Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

The cycle illustrates preceses of environmental issues by a product over,there ia lot of steps harmful to the environment of the country or world.

The cycle illustrates preceses of environmental issues by a product over, there ia lot of steps harmful to the environment of the country or world. q0pxX
The cycle illustrates preceses of environmental issues by a product over, there ia lot of steps harmful to the environment of the country or world. Overall, There 7 stages to produce the product from the design to the customers for the last stage is recycling the production. In the Stage 1 design and planning for the project. Second stage goes to the industry to consumption the material and energy resources the gas goes up and defctive the environment, third it’s production than trasmittied to the store of shop. fourth stage parking the product and distribution. stage five sale the production and drop to there house. Sixth stage use by the saler man then disposal from the productionafter long time use. stage seven recycling the product and reuse. This is a life cycle for the production.
The cycle illustrates
Possible spelling mistake found.
preceses
of environmental issues by a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
product
over, there
Possible spelling mistake found.
ia
lot of steps harmful to the environment of the country or world.

Overall
, There 7
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
stages
to produce the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
product
from the design to the customers for the last
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
stage
is recycling the production.

In the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Stage
1 design and planning for the project. Second
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
stage
goes to the industry to consumption the material and energy resources the gas goes up and
Possible spelling mistake found.
defctive
the environment, third it’s production than
Possible spelling mistake found.
trasmittied
to the store of shop.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
fourth
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
stage
parking the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
product
and distribution.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
stage
five sale the production and drop to
Did you mean "their"?
there
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
. Sixth
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
stage
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
by the
Possible spelling mistake found.
saler
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
man
then disposal from the
Possible spelling mistake found.
productionafter
long time
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
stage
seven recycling the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
product
and reuse. This is a life cycle for the production.
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS academic The cycle illustrates preceses of environmental issues by a product over, there ia lot of steps harmful to the environment of the country or world.

Academic
  American English
3 paragraphs
135 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • ?
    Include an introduction and conclusion
  • ?
    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • ?
    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • ?
    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts
  • 6.5band
    The Amount of Goods Transported in the UK
    The line graph displays the figures for goods transported in four different ways in the UK between 1974 and 2002. At the beginning of the period, the number of goods that were transported via road grew steadily from more than 70 to around 82 million tons in 1992, followed by a sharp rise to nearly ...
  • 6band
    Part-time and full-time in Britain
    According to this graph, the number of men and women in further education in Britain shows the following pattern. In the case of a male, the number of a male has declined slightly from about 100 thousand in 1970/71 to around 200 thousand in 1990/91. However, this figure rose back to near 850 thousa...
  • 5band
    a short introduction Faculty and School/University
    The vibrant and thunderous Thu Dau Mot University was located in Binh Duong province in which the key economic region of south Vietnam. Furthermore, the university had founded on June 24, 2006, according to Decision NO. 900 QD/TTG of the Prime Minister. Besides, the school’s mission is to train high...
  • 5.5band
    The report will refer to two maps that show how the town changed after establishment of a hydroelectric power dam, in 2 decades since 1990.
    The report will refer to two maps that show how the town changed after establishment of a hydroelectric power dam, in 2 decades since 1990. Overall, it is clear that the length of the river became shorter by the extension of a huge lage. Furthermore, the forest and farmland had completely disappear...
  • 6.5band
    The diagram shows a SEPTIC TANK SYSTEM & How domestic waste passes through the system for basic treatment before draining away.
    The diagram illustrates a septic tank system and the process of filtering water before draining it away. Overall, the key role of the system is to separate the mixture of domestic waste into three layers solids (or sludge), effluent ( filtered wastewater or sewage) and scum. This treatment of waste...
  • 5.5band
    The diagram shows preceses of environmental issues by a product over
    The cycle illustrates preceses of environmental issues by a product over, there ia lot of steps harmful to the environment of the country or world. Overall, There 7 stages to produce the product from the design to the customers for the last stage is recycling the production. life circle for product...





Get more results for topic:
  • The cycle illustrates preceses of environmental issues by a product over,there ia lot of steps harmful to the environment of the country or world.