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The difficulties that a university student have to face

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Being a university student not only gains many remarkable benefits but also faces inevitably biggest challenges. First and foremost, a university student must learn the way to adopt a new method of teaching. Unlike high school teachers, the teachers in university have just given briefly main information from the lections, even self-educated lessons. If university students want to grasp deeply and clearly about lectures, a student has to acquire from the Internet, books, … Because merely students take responsibility for studying, the teachers don’t care whether students understand the lectures or not. No one teaches carefully and is always by students' side whenever they have problems. That leads students can easily receive a low grade for the final test. Secondly, balancing among study in class, volunteer activities, and working part-time is also tough. A university student is about to spend three to four mornings or evenings studying in class each week and has enormous time to develop their knowledge at home. Therefore they have a little bit of time to join volunteer activities and barely enough leisure time if students have a part-time job. Even sometimes, students are required to take part in extracurricular activities, so students use their remaining time which they spend for themselves to relax. Eventually, a university student couldn't recharge batteries after a whole week and caused stress out. In conclusion, all of challenges make university students feel nervous and frustrated about studying at university.
Being a
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remarkable benefits
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biggest
challenges.
First
and foremost, a
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university
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student
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must
learn the way to adopt a new method of teaching. Unlike high school teachers, the teachers in
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university
have
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just
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given
briefly
main information from the
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lections
, even self-educated lessons. If
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university
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students
want to grasp
deeply
and
clearly
about lectures, a
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student
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has to
acquire from the Internet, books, …
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Because
merely
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students
take responsibility for studying, the teachers don’t care whether
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students
understand the lectures or not. No one teaches
carefully
and is always by students' side whenever they have problems. That leads
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students
can
easily
receive a low grade for the final
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test
.
Secondly
, balancing among study in
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class
, volunteer activities, and working part-time is
also
tough. A
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university
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student
is about to spend three to four mornings or evenings studying in
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class
each week and has enormous
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time
to develop their knowledge at home.
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Therefore
they have a
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little bit
of
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time
to
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join
volunteer activities and
barely
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enough
leisure
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time
if
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have a part-time job. Even
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sometimes
,
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students
are required
to
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take part
in extracurricular activities,
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so
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students
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use
their remaining
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time
which they spend for themselves to relax.
Eventually
, a
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university
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student
couldn't recharge batteries after a whole week and caused
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stress
out.
In conclusion
,
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all of challenges
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make
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university
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feel nervous and frustrated about studying at
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university
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