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Table chart to beer and fruit juice from different countries

Table chart to beer and fruit juice from different countries okq1V

This table depicts the details of that amount of consumption of two drinks: beer and fruit juice, for per person per year from diverse nations. It is clear from the graph that The highest proportion is for beer drinkers, while those who drink fruit juice are the least. According to what is shown, The country that occupies The first place in drinking beer is Ireland, with an average of 155 liters Per person. After the second and third place there are three countries almost at the same level of liters. Instead the last drinking country is Finland what a difference of 36L from the first nation. While on the schedule of fruit juice, there is no significant various between the numbers. The country that drinks the most juice is Canada. The liters figure continued to drop dramatically, until it reached to 24. 8L in New Zealand. To sum up, we could say that a lot of people prefer beer while there are many people who like juice. There is substantial different, Ireland and Canada have the highest rate, but there is a difference of 102L in favor of beer.

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