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The line graph illustrates the month wise mean of temperatures, throughout the year. And table describes the hours of sunshine in three popular cities like London, New York, Sydney. Overall, the graph shows that in the starting of the year like January, February and March months the temperatures in London and New York are quite low approximately between 0 and 10. Likewise, in the following months it increased drastically. In contrast, Sydney has recorded the highest temperatures in the starting of the year. Firstly, to compare London and New york the temperature recordings maintained thought out the year is almost same But in the last before two months like November and December, the New York has recorded fewer temperatures than London and in the end of the march and start point of the April the temperatures in New york has crossed the London temperatures Secondly, Sydney is opposite to the New York and London. In the starting of the year it has recorded around 25 temperatures While, at the end of the march it reduced to 15 and likewise till July. And again the temperature starts increasing from the mid of July and again reached peek. To compare the total hours of sunshine among three major cities, New York has recorded the highest hours of sunshine 2535 and second highest is Sydney it has recorded 2472 hours. Finally, London has recorded 1, 180 respectively.

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