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Survey about tea and coffee buying and drinking in Australian cities

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The bar chart illustrates views about percentages of residents buying various drinks during the last 4 weeks in 5 Australian cities (Sydney, Melbourne, Brisbane, Adelaide, Hobart). Overall, in all cities most of the people went to cafes for coffee or tea, while, the lowest percentage of residents bought fresh coffees during that period. In 3 cities, more than 60% of residents preferred cafes for drinks, however, in the other 2 cities in Brisbane and Adelaide, it was not above from 55%. Almost in all cities', percentage of buying instant coffee was less than buying fresh coffee except for Adelaide, even so, it's percentage was higher than 45%. The lowest rate for going to cafes was in Adelaide, for instance, it was not even high from 50%. Brisbane saw the lowest rate in buying fresh coffee in the last 4 weeks just as Adelaide did To sum up, Residents mostly went to cafe in all cities, meanwhile, the lowest amount of residents bought fresh coffee and it was only around 35-45% in 5 cities.
The bar chart illustrates views about
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percentages
of
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residents
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buying
various drinks during the last 4 weeks in 5 Australian
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cities
(Sydney, Melbourne, Brisbane, Adelaide, Hobart).

Overall
, in all
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cities
most of the
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people
went to
'cafes' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "cafés"
cafes
for
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coffee
or tea, while, the
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lowest
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percentage
of
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residents
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bought
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fresh
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coffees
during that period.

In 3
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cities
, more than 60% of
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residents
preferred
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cafes
for drinks,
however
, in the other 2
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cities
in Brisbane and Adelaide, it was not above from 55%. Almost in all cities',
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percentage
of
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buying
instant
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coffee
was less than
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buying
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fresh
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coffee
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except for
Adelaide, even
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so
, it's
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percentage
was higher than 45%.

The
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lowest
rate for going to
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cafes
was in Adelaide,
for instance
, it was not even high from 50%. Brisbane
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saw
the
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lowest
rate in
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buying
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fresh
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coffee
in the last 4 weeks
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just
as Adelaide
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did


To sum up,
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Residents
mostly
went to
'cafe' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "café"
cafe
in all
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cities
, meanwhile, the
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lowest
amount of
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residents
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bought
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fresh
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coffee
and it was
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only
around 35-45% in 5
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cities
.
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IELTS academic Survey about tea and coffee buying and drinking in Australian cities

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5.5
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