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Summary the information in a chart showing coffee and tea buying habits in 5 Australian cities

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An analysis of the chart showing the purchasing culture of tea and coffee in 5 Australian cities shows that most people prefer tea and coffee brought at a café followed by instant coffee. Fresh coffee was the least preferred. The liking for fresh coffee was highest in Sydney and Melbourne and lowest in Brisbane and Adelaide. Hobart was the second highest. Hobart consumed the most instant coffee after which was Brisbane, Adelaide, Melbourne then Sydney. Over 55% of residents in all cities except Adelaide bought coffee at shops. In Adelaide, slightly less people bought coffee at shops as compared to instant coffee. It appears that the most popular trend is to get a coffee from a café followed by instant coffee and the least popular is fresh brewed coffee.
An analysis of the chart showing the purchasing culture of tea and
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in 5 Australian cities
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prefer tea and
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brought at a café followed by instant
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. Fresh
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was the least preferred.

The liking for fresh
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was highest in Sydney and Melbourne and lowest in Brisbane and Adelaide. Hobart was the second highest.

Hobart consumed the most instant
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after which was Brisbane, Adelaide, Melbourne then Sydney. Over 55% of residents in all cities except Adelaide
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bought
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at shops. In Adelaide,
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at shops as compared to instant
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. It appears that the most popular trend is to
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IELTS academic Summary the information in a chart showing coffee and tea buying habits in 5 Australian cities

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