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Summary of enquires by Tourists

Summary of enquires by Tourists 2lx6j

Tourism is really famous any where in the world. As people have immense passion towars travel they also approach to Tourist Information Offices. As everybody has curiosity about how to travel, obviously people will have so many queries in their mind. In order to clarify the doubts of tourists "Tourist Information Offices" were established to guide the tourists in right way. Tourist Information Offices have opened different mode of communication for queries. They are: In person, by letter/email, by telephone. As we could see in the graph in-person communication has drastically increased over past six months around 1900 were communicating directly with the office staff by the end of june, As technology has been increasing letter/email communication has reduced because it causes delay in getting information it's been reduced to 390 by the end of June, Telephone communication is the easiest and quicket way it has reached 1600 by the end of June. In conclusion, we could see many tourists prefer in- person communication, because it will be accurate.

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