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Summary number of tourists visiting a Caribbean island

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The line graph illustrates the variable data in number of Caribbean island tourists, The two lines show yearly amount of visitors who staying on cruise ship and land while another one represents the summary of those. The former line paraphrase the statistics of stayed-on-cruise customers, a few amount of tourists which is less than half a million appeared in 2010’s and 2012’s, despite 2011’s and 2013’s touches half a million. The number significantly rising between 2014’s and 2017’s, reaches the peak at 2 millions ship stayers. The latter line instances the number of who stayed on island, the first two years which are 2010’s and 2011’s, appeared nearly same information over a half million for a quarter. There is a rising from 2012’s to 2013’s up to one and a half millions, Then continuously no changed for several years after that, until 2016’s shows a lightly decreases for a quarter and rises to same point as 2013’s in a year after. The last section, this line groupes those above and shows the overall of guests each year, the number incessantly grow between 2010’s and 2015’s, started from a million until reached over two and a half millions within 5 years. Then the 2016’s reveals no changes compares to previous year, in 2017’s the line rockets and touch the moon at one million visitors increased, This is might seems to be the top of the mountain by three and a half millions guests recorded for this year.

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of Caribbean
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show
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few amount
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 rising between 2014’s and 2017’s, reaches the peak at 2 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withthousandtrillionmuchlottotalsum
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Did you mean "now" (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?now
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, in 2017’s the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withboundaryedgechannel
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