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The pie chart shows the national expenditure of the United Arab Emirates government in the year of 2000. 313 million AED had been allocation into ten sectors and Social security contributed the largest proportion in spending while the budget consumed by Transport was not significant. According to the figures, the United Arab Emirates spent more than 300 million AED in ten different segments. Generally speaking, the social security spending consumed one-third of the total expenditure with 100 billion AED. The second highest expense was located in Health and personal social services with the figures of 53 billion. Followed by 38 billion spent in the education sector, in other prospective, was more than double of the expenditure in Law and order. Identical spending was found in Debit interest and un-named Other expenditure whereas both had 23 billion AED in total. Among these 10 sectors, the expenditure in Transport was minimal as it only had 9 billion which counted 2. 87% of the total national spending in the budget of 2000.

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 in the year of 2000. 313 million AED had been allocation into ten sectors and Social security contributed the largest proportion in You use this word too often, consider replacing it withusewasteconsumegiveinvestcontribute
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 while the budget consumed by Transport was not significant.

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 in Transport was minimal as it This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
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 which counted 2. 87% of the total national You use this word too often, consider replacing it withusewasteconsumegiveinvestcontribute
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