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The given graph demonstrate the total number of bananas imported to 4 nations(Japan, France, German and USA) over a period of 8 years between 1996 and 2004. Overall, it is explicitly apparent that for most of the period, the price of bananas was very high in Japan, while the least the price was in the USA. In 1996, the bananas were sold at similar prices in Japan and France amounting to 2 USD/kg. There was no change saw in the price of bananas for a next one and half year in France, but the price was inclined to 3 USD/kg in Japan in the same period, but it dwindled to 1. 5 USD/kg and 2 USD/ kg respectively in 1999. Cost of bananas fluctuated till the end and accounted for 2. 5 USD/kg in Japan and 2 USD/kg in France in 2004. Furthermore, with Germany and the USA, 1. 5 USD/kg cost was recorded in Germany that was 0. 5 USD/kg higher than the price of bananas in the USA in 1996. Price was risen by. 25USD/kg in both countries in 1998. The cost remained stable in the USA at 1. 25USD/kg from 1999 to 2004, but price grew slightly to 2 USD/kg in 2002 in Germany before dropping to 1. 75 USD/kg in 2004.
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graph demonstrate the total number of bananas imported to 4 nations(Japan, France, German and USA) over a period of 8 years between 1996 and 2004.

Overall
, it is
explicitly
apparent that for most of the period, the
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price
of bananas was
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very
high in
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Japan
, while the least the
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price
was in the USA.

In 1996, the bananas
were sold
at similar
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prices
in
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Japan
and France amounting to 2 USD/kg. There was no
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change
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in the
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of bananas for a
next
one and half year in France,
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but
the
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was inclined
to 3 USD/kg in
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Japan
in the same period,
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it dwindled to 1. 5 USD/kg and 2 USD/ kg
respectively
in 1999. Cost of bananas fluctuated till the
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end
and accounted for 2. 5 USD/kg in
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Japan
and 2 USD/kg in France in 2004.

Furthermore
, with Germany and the USA, 1. 5 USD/kg cost
was recorded
in Germany that was 0. 5 USD/kg higher than the
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price
of bananas in the USA in 1996.
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Price
was risen
by. 25USD/kg in both countries in 1998. The cost remained stable in the USA at 1. 25USD/kg from 1999 to 2004,
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grew
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dropping to 1. 75 USD/kg in 2004.
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