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The chart below shows the sale of cars and trucks in Italy from 2001 to 2008.

The chart below shows the sale of cars and trucks in Italy from 2001 to 2008. VBaGJ
The line graph illustrates the data of number of cars and trucks which were sold between 2001। and 2008 in Italy. To conclude, the cars had been sold at highest rate since the given time frame, while the trucks had minimum numbers in the sale. It is clear that, In the beginning, the sale of cars witnessed 25 thousands, it stood at the same numbers before rising gradually upto 40, 000 in between 2003 and 2004. It remained constant in sixth year, after following a downward trend, it inclinied significantly to its pinnacle (47, 000). As regards trucks, initially, the sale of lorries stood at 20 thousands, it followed a decling trend and accounted for 15, 000 in 2002. Before went up quickly from 15 thousands to 34 thousands, it remained stable inbetween 2002 to 2004. The sale went down drastically and reached its nadir, accounting for 5, 000 in 2006 and stabilized in the remaining time period.
The line graph illustrates the data of number of cars and trucks which
were sold
between 2001। and 2008 in Italy.
To conclude
, the cars had
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. It is
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that, In the beginning, the
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of cars witnessed 25 thousands, it stood at the same numbers
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40, 000 in between 2003 and 2004. It remained constant in sixth year, after following a downward trend, it
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to its pinnacle (47, 000). As regards trucks,
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sale
of lorries stood at 20 thousands, it followed a
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went down
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and reached its nadir, accounting for 5, 000 in 2006 and stabilized in the remaining time period.
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