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This process diagram illustrates how a fish pie is being processed. Overall, in a fish pie, there are 4 main ingredients such as pears, sauce, fish, and potatoes and first stage starting with delivering potatoes and fresh salmons into the manufacturing site which are good to be used within a month and less than 12 hours respectively. In the first stage, the potatoes will be washed and put into the roller and will perform a set of operations such as peeling, cutting, boiling, and storing for further use. In the meantime, fresh salmon will be marinated with salt and lemon before putting them into the oven. After this, the skins and bones will be removed by hand before the inspection process. Afterward, the salmon will be assembled into a microwaveable container with pears, pre-prepared sauce, and potato slices. Then, it will be wrapped and stored in a freezer to freeze and as the final step, wrapped fish pie will be stored and ready to dispatch.

This process diagram illustrates how a fish pie is being processed
. Overall
, in a fish pie, there are 4 main ingredients such as pears, sauce, fish, and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withyam
potatoes
 and first
 stage starting with delivering You use this word too often, consider replacing it withyam
potatoes
 and fresh salmons into the manufacturing site which are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 to be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 within a month and less than 12 hours respectively
.

In the first
 stage, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withyam
potatoes
 will be washed
 and put into the roller and will perform a set of operations such as peeling, cutting, boiling, and storing for further
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
. In the meantime, fresh salmon will be marinated
 with salt and lemon This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 putting them into the oven. After this, the skins and bones will be removed
 by hand This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 the inspection process.

Afterward, the salmon will be assembled
 into a microwaveable container with pears, pre-prepared sauce, and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withyam
potato
 slices. Then, it will be wrapped
 and stored in a freezer to freeze and as the final step, wrapped fish pie will be stored
 and ready to dispatch. 