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The chart represents, the various crime categories reported in Newport city Centre during the year 2003 and 2012. The three different areas of crime include burglary, Karthik and robbery. The units measured are in numbers per event. Overall, car thefts are reported as the highest in the year 2012. While property rates are document at the lowest, less than thousand. On the One hand, the burglary was measured highest approximately 3800 in the year 2004. Followed by which, it had declined in the trend until the year 2008. It had a steep increase in the year 2009 and has maintained a similar trend of about 1300 incidents in the year 2012. On the other hand, robbery has been more or less the same since 2003 to 2012. The car thefts had fluctuating results until 2006, dropping to around 2000 cases. Despite the ups and downs the year 2012 documented more than 2500 events.
The chart represents, the various crime categories reported in Newport city
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during the
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year
2003 and 2012. The three
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areas of crime include burglary,
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Karthik
and robbery.
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The
units measured are in numbers per
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event
.

Overall
, car thefts
are reported
as the highest in the
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year
2012. While property rates are document at the lowest, less than
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thousand
.

On the One hand, the burglary
was measured
highest approximately 3800 in the
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year
2004. Followed by which, it had declined in the trend until the
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year
2008. It had a steep increase in the
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year
2009 and has maintained a similar trend of about 1300 incidents in the
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year
2012.

On the other hand
, robbery has been more or less the same since 2003 to 2012. The car thefts had fluctuating results until 2006, dropping to around 2000 cases. Despite the ups and downs the
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year
2012 documented more than 2500
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events
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