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Students of three world languages, 2020-2030

Students of three world languages, 2020-2030 KWpGw
The line graph tells estimation about a large amount of students who will learn three main globe languages over a period of a decade between 2020 and 2030. Overview, as can be seen from the graph that there are considerable upward trends in the number of Hanguage learners for three languages. Another interesting point is that junior members of these world languages began at a low of 10 in 2020 and they will finish at a peale of 100 in 2030. Looking at the details, regarding Mandarin, the number started over 100 million. There will be a remarkable inereare in the first four year. Altough during the next two year It will go up slightly. The number of people who study in Mandarin will have rocketed at a peak of approximately 580 million by -2030. The munber of Spanish began about 200 million. However, there is predicted to be a surge in the number of leamers 2012 2026. At this time Mandarin will be nearly reaching the number of Spanish students. In the next years, the expectations shows that the number of learning Mandarin will have overtaken Spanish's by the year 2026. The difference between two language students will be about 80 million. In the addition, the number of English students also started at a low of 10. There was steady rise in the number of people who study English. We can see some fluctuations in question. Despite the fluctuating, It is estimated that English learners will have a dramatic increase in the last four years, Which means that it is expected to keep status as the most popular language among the world learners.
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globe
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over a period of a decade between 2020 and 2030.

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from the graph that there are considerable upward trends in the
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learners for three
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. Another interesting point is that junior members of these world
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began at a low of 10 in
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, regarding Mandarin, the
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It will go up
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who study in Mandarin will have rocketed at a peak of approximately 580 million by -2030. The
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began about 200 million.
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2012 2026. At this time Mandarin will be
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. In the
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2026. The difference between two
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language
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will be about 80 million.

In the addition, the
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IELTS academic Students of three world languages, 2020-2030

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
274 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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