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Spending in certain categories

Spending in certain categories Wqp7W

-The bar chart shows how much people in four countries (United States, Canada, the United Kingdom and Japan) paid for different products and services in 2009. In each of the four nations, most of the money is spent on food and drink. while people had to spend less on health and clothing, the Japanese and British spent 23% and 20% on food, compared to about 15% in Canada and the United States. However, more than a quarter of the income is allocated for this purpose, and Americans are the largest investors in housing. Surprisingly, its northern neighbors stand in the lower part of the spectrum, at 21%. When it comes to Canadian transportation, Canadians spend about a portion of their money on it. In contrast, transport tariffs were the least expensive in Japan (10%). In terms of smaller stocks, US health care spending was the highest at 7%, while in other countries the ratio was less than 5%. In terms of clothing, this category of products accounts for about 5% of the budgets of citizens of all these nations.

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, transport tariffs were the least expensive in Japan (10%). In terms of smaller stocks, US health care spending was the highest at 7%, while in other countries the ratio was less than 5%. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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 terms of clothing, this category of products accounts for about 5% of the budgets of citizens of all these nations. 