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Southland main exports on international tourism, dairy products and meat products during 2000 to 2015 and future import in 2025

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The bar chart provide Southlands main exports on International tourism dairy products and meat products during 2000 to 2015 and future Import in 2025. Overall, dairy products and international tourism showing an increase trend expect meat production. But also Forecast worth dairy products and meat products steeply dropping. In 2000, international tourism and around 8 billion but in 2015 it is slightly raised to £1000, 000, 000 also in 2025 approximately £1 billion. Furthermore, Dairy products earned around £7 billion. But in 2015 dramatically rose to 10, 000, 000, 000 Pound there is an increasing of £4 billion and dropped to £9. 5 billion in 2025. Meat products exported around £6 billion in 2000 and Slightly drop to £5. 5 billion and decrease of 0. 5 billion In 2025 respectively.
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main exports on International tourism
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during 2000 to 2015 and future Import in 2025.

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and international tourism showing an increase trend
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production.
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steeply
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In 2000, international tourism and around 8
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earned around £7 billion.

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in 2015
dramatically
rose to 10, 000, 000, 000 Pound there is an increasing of £4
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and dropped to £9. 5
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billion
in 2025.
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Meat
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exported around £6
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in 2000 and
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IELTS academic Southland main exports on international tourism, dairy products and meat products during 2000 to 2015 and future import in 2025

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