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Hours per wrak that spend on 8 certain categories in London during 2002 and 2007

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The bar chart Illustrate the hours per week that spend on 7 certain categories in London between 2002 and 2007. Overall, watching television is teenagers Mostly spending their time and Bowling is Least they spend their time. Going to pubs, Shopping, watching DVDs, homework are the other method of teenagers spending expect sport it’s have an fluctuation. In 2002, watching television is 25 percentage and dramatically increased to 38 percentage in 2007. There is a 13% hike on this category. Going to pop is another activity seven percentage on 2002 and rose to 18% in 2007. Further more, Shopping jumped 7% to 15% in six years. However, Homework drop 12% to 8% in the end of the year. In behind DVDs and sport steeply dropped. Sports decrease 10% to 3% DVDs increase 10% to 18% till 2004 and drop to 10% respectively. From the beginning bowling goes down 4% to 1% in 2007
The bar chart Illustrate the hours per week that spend on 7 certain categories in London between 2002 and 2007.

Overall
, watching television is
teenagers
Mostly
spending their time and Bowling is Least they spend their time. Going to pubs, Shopping, watching DVDs, homework are the other method of
teenagers
spending
expect
sport it’s have
an
fluctuation.

In 2002, watching television is 25 percentage and
dramatically
increased to 38 percentage in 2007. There is a 13% hike on this category. Going to pop is another activity seven percentage on 2002 and rose to 18% in 2007.
Further
more, Shopping jumped 7% to 15% in six years.

However
, Homework drop 12% to 8% in the
end
of the year. In behind DVDs and sport
steeply
dropped. Sports decrease 10% to 3% DVDs increase 10% to 18% till 2004 and drop to 10%
respectively
. From the beginning bowling goes down 4% to 1% in 2007
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IELTS academic Hours per wrak that spend on 8 certain categories in London during 2002 and 2007

Academic
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152 words
6.5
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