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The graph shows how many apples, pears, oranges and plums were sold at a greengrocer's over a three-day holiday period (Saturday to Monday); the table below the graph provides the total number of customers each day. The graph shows that Sunday was the busiest day at the greengrocers, as they had the most customers; this is reflected in the sales of the fruit, which all sold in the highest quantities on Sunday. However, although more plums were sold on Sunday than on Saturday, the highest number of plums were sold on Monday, despite the greengrocer's having less customers on Monday than on Sunday. On Saturday, more apples were sold than any other fruit. 40 apples were sold on Saturday, which is almost the same as the amount of oranges sold on Sunday. Around 1/3 of the total visitors came to the greengrocer's on Monday, and on Monday the sale of pluums accounted for 20% of the total sales of the recorded fruit. In Comparison, on Saturday, plums made up only 10% of the total sales
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of the fruit, which all sold in the highest quantities on
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, more apples
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. Around 1/3 of the
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visitors came to the greengrocer's on Monday, and on Monday the
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