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The diagram illustrates heat lost and energy wasted which are happened in a house due to the air circulation.

The diagram illustrates heat lost and energy wasted which are happened in a house due to the air circulation. Ykld5

The picture illustrates what occurs with heat and energy when air goes into and out of the house. Dark and light arrows distinguishes air getting in and out accordingly. The diagrams shows the house and specifies the process of air circulation that leads to heat and energy loss. There are five rooms and one attic placed above the second floor. Several places are depicted where air leaks into and out of the house. Firstly, air gets into the house from dryer and kitchen fan vents. Some of air penetrates the building through windows and doors. It also might leak into from crawl space and electrical outlets. The exit for air is placed on the top layer of the house. Firstly, the threads go outside through a coupe of vents like bathroom fan and plumbing stack ones. Attic hatch and recessed lights, situated on the ceilings of the second floor, also affect air leak.

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. Dark and light arrows distinguishes You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbreathbreezewind
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 getting in and out accordingly
.

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 and specifies the process of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbreathbreezewind
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air
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. Firstly
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