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Summarise the information of two maps of hospital in year 2007 and 2010.

Summarise the information of two maps of hospital in year 2007 and 2010. R0D28
Two maps depict the information regarding road availability to city hospitals in two different year, 2007 and 2010. Overall, the main structural differences of city Hospital are parking plot and roundabout subsequently in the year 2007 and 2010. In the year 2007, city hospital was situated at North side ans was surrounded by mainly two roadways namely, ring road and hospital road. City road at Eastern south area is attached with hospital road. Along with the hospital road there was Bus stop at both sides east and west. Eastern south bus stop was mainly for the usage of car parking for staff members and public parking. In the year 2010, there were major changes in roadways and individual parking facilities. Public car park is situated at Northern east area to city hospital along with the ring road. Bus station and staff car park both were situated along with the hospital road at Southern west area and eastern south area accordingly. The hospital road and ring road both were conjucted by roundabout at South and north direction.
Two maps depict the information regarding
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road
availability to city
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hospitals
in two
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different
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year
, 2007 and 2010.

Overall
, the main structural differences of city
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Hospital
are parking plot and roundabout
subsequently
in the
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year
2007 and 2010.

In the
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year
2007, city
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hospital
was situated
at North side ans
was surrounded
by
mainly
two roadways
namely
, ring
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road
and
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hospital
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road
. City
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road
at Eastern south
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area
is attached
with
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hospital
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road
. Along with the
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hospital
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road
there was Bus
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stop
at both sides east and west. Eastern south bus
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stop
was
mainly
for the usage of car parking for staff members and public parking.

In the
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year
2010, there were major
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changes
in roadways and individual parking facilities. Public car park
is situated
at Northern east
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area
to city
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hospital
along with the ring road.

Bus station and staff car park both
were situated
along with the
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hospital
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road
at Southern west
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area
and eastern south
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area
accordingly
. The
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hospital
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road
and ring
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road
both were
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conjucted
by roundabout at South and north direction.
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IELTS academic Summarise the information of two maps of hospital in year 2007 and 2010.

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