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Some think that having ambition is a good quality. Is it important to be ambitious? Is it positive or negative characteristic?

People want to touch height in their life in terms of currier and money. And they desire to achieve goal with driven their hardwork and ambition qualities. So, ambition is a good and positive things for success and this essay shall be discussed about two reasons behind it. To begin with positive, people can hardwork toward their goal, if they have ambition. It is strong quality of people to achieve goal. For instance, my ambition was to work at Tata Motors company as HR manager at the age of 18 and than I started hardwork toward my goal and I get a job at the age of 23. So, ambition is positive things to be success in life and it's helps to people achieve their goal. Moreover, people can do anything with their ambition because its become to person strong minded. Its increase confidence. So, people can achieve easily their goal. For an example, my weight was 85kg at the age of 21. So, I decided to maintain my body and its shape and then I was started gym and followed diet charts. On that time, its difficult for me but I was not losing my ambition and I was working on my body for 2 years and then I saw my body has perfect shape. Therefore, it has a second time to prove, ambition is a good quality. In conclusion, ambition can made people life successful and it's good for society as a terms of success. So, it is strong characteristic, people have to do.
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achieve
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with driven their
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qualities.
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things for success and this essay shall be
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discussed about two
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ambition
. It is strong quality of
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people
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achieve
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ambition
was to work at Tata Motors
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as HR manager at the age of 18 and
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than
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a job at the age of 23.
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is
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life and
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can do anything with their
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ambition
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because
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strong minded
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goal
. For an example, my weight was
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85kg
at the age of 21.
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So
, I decided to maintain my body and its
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shape and
then I was
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started
gym and followed diet charts. On that time,
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difficult for me
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ambition and
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years and
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people
life
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successful and
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IELTS academic Some think that having ambition is a good quality. Is it important to be ambitious? Is it positive or negative characteristic?

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5.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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