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Some people think that government should subsidise fruits and vegetables to make healthy food cheaper. Other argues that tax should be set on unhealthy food. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people think that government should subsidise fruits and vegetables to make healthy food cheaper. Other argues that tax should be set on unhealthy food. oO29
It is believed by some that government should make fruits and vegetables tax free. However, other reckons that tax should imply on fast foods. I personally take side with the latter view due to increasing problem of obesity and different health problems. Advocate of the former favour tax free healthy products. According to them, health plays a vital role in one's life because to accomplish the task, good physique is essential. Moreover, healthy diet keeps an individual away from boredom, lazyness as it keeps the person's mind more fresh than unhealthy diet. Advocates of the latter favour tax implied on table food. Accirding to them, there are dual aspect, firstly it will decrease the consumption of fast food which will keep tge person away from various diaeases such as heart attack, blood pressure problem, cholestrol and the list is never ending. Secondly, from government point of view it is highly beneficial fir them as the tax collected from the sales of fast food is the revenue. Which can be used for the further development of the country. In my opinion, healthy lifestyle is missing nowadays and majority are suffering from obesity, so to curb the situation high tax must be implemented on the street food. Which will ultimately lead to a lifestyle full of vitamins, protein, carbohydrates and many more that are availed from green vegetables and fruits. To sum up, government should imply taxes so that to reduce consumption of fast food.
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is believed
by
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some
that
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government
should
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make
fruits and vegetables
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tax free
.
However
, other reckons that
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tax
should imply on
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fast
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foods
. I
personally
take side with the latter view due to increasing problem of obesity and
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different
health problems.

Advocate of the former
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favour
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tax free
healthy products. According to them, health plays a vital role in one's life
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because
to accomplish the task,
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good
physique is essential.
Moreover
, healthy diet
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keeps
an individual away from boredom,
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lazyness
as it
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keeps
the person's mind more fresh than unhealthy diet.

Advocates of the latter
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favour
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tax
implied on table
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food
.
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Accirding
to them, there are dual
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aspect
,
firstly
it will decrease the consumption of
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fast
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food
which will
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keep
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tge
person away from various
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diaeases
such as heart attack, blood pressure problem,
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cholestrol
and the list is never ending.
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, from
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government
point of view it is
highly
beneficial fir them as the
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tax
collected from the sales of
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fast
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food
is the revenue. Which can be
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used
for the
further
development of the country.

In my opinion, healthy lifestyle is missing nowadays and majority are suffering from obesity,
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so
to curb the situation high
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tax
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must
be implemented
on the street
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food
. Which will
ultimately
lead to a lifestyle full of vitamins, protein, carbohydrates and
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many
more that
are availed
from green vegetables and fruits.

To sum up,
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government
should imply
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taxes
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so
that to
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reduce
consumption of
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fast
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food
.
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IELTS academic Some people think that government should subsidise fruits and vegetables to make healthy food cheaper. Other argues that tax should be set on unhealthy food.

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