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he bar chart below shows average UK salaries, by city. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The bar chart presents approximately salaries in the city of the UK that compose London, Manchester, Glasgow, Bristol, Birmingham, Edinburgh, and Cambridge. The highest salary in the UK is London that is the capital city of England after that following by Cambridge where well-educated people. Moreover, the metropolitan of Scotland like Edinburgh is a higher worker's fare than Glasgow which has the same country. Focusing on the average cost of working salaries, the peak is around 33, 634 pounds sterling in London and the deep is roundly 25, 500 in Birmingham. However, the comparison of salaries in London and Edinburgh that central city of political management in the UK differents around 3-fold of London than Edinburgh then the comparing of same cities scale-like Manchester, Glasgow, and Birmingham are range salary between 25, 531 to 26, 150 pounds sterling. Interestingly, the differences in cities size as Bristol in the UK and Glasgow in Scotland are nearly worker's cost approximate 27, 000 pounds sterling.
The bar chart presents approximately
salaries
in the city of the UK that compose London, Manchester, Glasgow, Bristol, Birmingham, Edinburgh, and Cambridge. The highest
salary
in the UK is London
that is
the capital city of England after that following by Cambridge where well-educated
people
.
Moreover
, the metropolitan of Scotland like Edinburgh is a higher worker's fare than Glasgow which has the same country.

Focusing on the average cost of working
salaries
, the peak is around 33,
634 pounds
sterling in London and the deep is
roundly
25, 500 in Birmingham.
However
, the comparison of
salaries
in London and Edinburgh that central city of political management in the UK
differents
around 3-fold of London than Edinburgh then the comparing of same
cities
scale-like Manchester, Glasgow, and Birmingham are range
salary
between 25, 531 to 26,
150 pounds
sterling.
Interestingly
, the differences in
cities
size as Bristol in the UK and Glasgow in Scotland are
nearly
worker's cost approximate 27, 000 pounds sterling.
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