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Some children find some school subjects difficult ( for example maths or philosophy ) , so these subjects should be optional rather than compulsory. To what extend do you agree or disagree ?

Some children find some school subjects difficult ( for example maths or philosophy ), so these subjects should be optional rather than compulsory. em0W

A glance at the graph provided reveals some data concerning the overall proportion of minutes of phone calls in a particular country over the span 7 years(from 1995 to 2002) and these are divided into 3 groups. Overall, it is obvious from the chart, fixed line and mobile calls saw a remarkable increase but local-fixed line vice versa. As can be seen from the chart, local-fixed line started to increase from 70 b minutes to 90 b minutes till 1998s, and after standing a steady for a year, it decreased till 70 b minutes again. Next, national and international-fixed line saw a significant increase till the end of the period step by step from 35 to 60 billion minutes. However, the last line namely mobiles was in the lowest grade with 5 b minutes in 1995, and it grew up marginally till the 1999s to 10 b minutes. After that, it saw a prominent increase from 10 to 40 b minutes till the end of a year.

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