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the pie chart below gives information about the amount of revenue generated by football clubs in Australia. The line graph gives information about the attendance of fans at Australian football matches. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

the pie chart below gives information about the amount of revenue generated by football clubs in Australia. The line graph gives information about the attendance of fans at Australian football matches. EXRx

The information given from the pie chart and the line graph focuses on the activity of football fans in Australia. More specifically, they present the amount of revenue fans generated for each team from 2008-2014 and how many attended football matches during the same period of time. The chart shows that 20% the revenue brought in by football clubs is meant for Hawthorn, whereas 30% is shared equally between Sydney Swans and Adelaide. The other half of the profits go to other Australian teams. From the graph it is clear that both Adelaide and Hawthorn fans’ presence in football matches has declined over the years. The former reported more than 80 thousand attendees in 2018 and 70 thousand in 2014, while the latter started with 50 thousand and by 2014 the number had dropped by 10 thousand fans. At the same time, the Sydney Swans fans indicate a fluctuation in attendances but overall, the number of the audience went up only by a few thousand. Obviously, the crowd for other teams is triple the number of Sydney Swans, and indicates instability as well. All in all, the most popular teams in Australia, Adelaide, Hawthorn and Sydney Swans, take up a lot of space in both the pie chart and the line graph, because of their sizable fan base. On the other side, the category with the other teams illustrates just as good results, not for a large number of fans, but for variety of teams combined under one section.

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 fans in Australia. More specifically
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 from 2008-2014 and how This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
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 attended You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsoccer
football
 matches during the same period of time.

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 that 20% the revenue brought in by You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsoccer
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 clubs is meant
 for Hawthorn, whereas 30% is shared
equally
 between Sydney Swans and Adelaide. The You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnewalternativemore
other
 half of the profits go to You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnewalternativemore
other
 Australian teams.

From the graph it is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :apparent
clear
 that both Adelaide and Hawthorn fans’ presence in You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsoccer
football
 matches has declined over the years. The former reported more than 80 thousand attendees in 2018 and 70 thousand in 2014, while the latter This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiated
started
 with 50 thousand and by 2014 the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsumtotalfigurestatistic
number
 had dropped by 10 thousand fans. At the same time, the Sydney Swans fans indicate a fluctuation in attendances This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
overall
, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsumtotalfigurestatistic
number
 of the audience went up This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 by a few thousand. Obviously
, the crowd for You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnewalternativemore
other
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 is triple the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsumtotalfigurestatistic
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 of Sydney Swans, and indicates instability as well
.

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 space in both the pie chart and the line graph, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
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 of their sizable fan base. On the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnewalternativemore
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 side, the category with the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnewalternativemore
other
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 illustrates This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
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 results, not for a large You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsumtotalfigurestatistic
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 of fans, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
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 for variety of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withclubcompanysquadpartyorganizationlineup
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 combined under one section. 