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So what should we do to resolve the conflicts and help them rebuild their relation ship ?

So what should we do to resolve the conflicts and help them rebuild their relation ship? peROm

The generation gap between parents and teenagers is too wide, resulting in differences in attitudes and viewpoints. What I mentioning is that is one of the cause of disagreement, particularly those concerning in lifestyle and education. So what should we do to resolve the conflicts and help them rebuild their relation ship? At first, parents and adolescents should lend an ear to each other. To be honest, when they have disagreement, they tend to become self-absorbed and try to keep them at bay

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IELTS academic So what should we do to resolve the conflicts and help them rebuild their relation ship?

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American English

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82 words

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4.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5

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Lexical Resource: 6.5

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Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.5

Answer all parts of the question
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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