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This report will highlight similarities and differences of the city hospital in the years 2007 and 2010. Overall, there are 4 changes in the city hospital include a Bus station, 2 roundabouts and a separate public park. Notably, there are two roundabouts in between the city road, and the city hospital on the hospital road and both the roundabouts connect to the Buse station on the southwest of the map. Moving on to the Public car park on the northeast corner of the map which is connected to the ring road and the preview location in which the public park was located is replaced by a staff car park which is on the opposite side of the Bus station along the hospital road.
This report will highlight similarities and differences of the city
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hospital
in the years 2007 and 2010.

Overall
, there are 4
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changes
in the city
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hospital
include a Bus station, 2 roundabouts and a separate public park.

Notably
, there are two roundabouts in between the city
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road
, and the city
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hospital
on the
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hospital
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road
and both the roundabouts connect to the
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Buse
station on the southwest of the map.

Moving on to the Public car park on the northeast corner of the map which
is connected
to the ring
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road
and the preview location in which the public park
was located
is replaced
by a staff car park which is on the opposite side of the Bus station along the
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hospital
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road
.
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IELTS academic similarities and differences of the city hospital

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