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Similarites that has brought to improve the grange park.

Similarites that has brought to improve the grange park. kbxB8

The given palns above shows the similarites and differences between the public park that got changed from 1920 to till now. Lets us have a deep look over it. The park named Grange Park has established in the year 1920 and still exists in the same place but with some remodulations. The park has entrance points in the north and east directions that haven't changed from begining to now. The fountain at the center of the park now repalced by a rosegarden with seats all over it. Beside the fountain, stage for musicians now refigured to a big amphitheater for concerts which is there at the corner. The three rose Gardens before got reduced to one rose garden. Instead of rose garden cafe has newly built at the top most right. the pond of water palnts renovated to large childrens play area. just beside the elodon street entrance glasshouse has rebulit to water feature similar to wall fall. one more rotue has added to reach the underground car park By considering all the features that lifted up to modern trend. lot of technology has been improved in the primises of grange park.

The This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
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palns
 above This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstratesportraysindicatesdisplays
shows
 the Possible spelling mistake found.similarities
similarites
 and differences between the public park

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterThat
that
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteredadjusted
changed
 from 1920 to till You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtoday
now
. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorizes
Lets
 us have a deep look over it.

The You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
 named Grange You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
Park
 has established in the year 1920 and still
 exists in the same place This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but


This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterWith
with
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
Possible spelling mistake found.
remodulations
. The You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
 has entrance points in the north and east directions that haven't This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteredadjusted
changed
Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphfrom.from!from?from:from,from;
from


This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterBegining
begining
 to You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtoday
now
. The fountain at the center of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtoday
now
Possible spelling mistake found.replaced
repalced
 by a Possible spelling mistake found.rose garden
rosegarden
 with seats all over it.

Beside the fountain, stage for musicians You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtoday
now
Possible spelling mistake found.prefigured
refigured
 to a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:hugeenormousgiganticvast
big
 amphitheater for concerts which is there at the

corner. The three rose Gardens This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alleviated
reduced
 to one rose garden. Instead
 of rose garden 'cafe' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "café"café
cafe
 has newly
 built Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphat.at!at?at:at,at;
at


This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterThe
the
 top most right. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterThe
the
 pond of water Possible spelling mistake found.plantspaintspants
palnts
 renovated to large Possible spelling mistake found.children splaychildren play
childrens play
 area. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterJust
just
 beside the Possible spelling mistake found.Eldon
elodon
 street entrance

glasshouse has Possible spelling mistake found.rebuilt
rebulit
 to water feature similar to wall fall.

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterOne
one
 more Possible spelling mistake found.routerogueroteroueroué
rotue
 has This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrued
added
 to reach the underground car park

By considering all the features that This phrase is redundant. Consider using "lifted".lifted
lifted up
 to modern trend. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterLot
lot
 of technology has been This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :ameliorated
improved
 in the Possible spelling mistake found.premisespromises
primises
Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphof.of!of?of:of,of;
of


This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterGrange
grange
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
. 