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The maps illustrate some change of Frenton in 1990 and 2012.

The maps illustrate some change of Frenton in 1990 and 2012. DVY5o

The maps illustrate some change of Frenton in 1990 and 2012. Overall, Frenton became modernization in 2012. The figures of trees decreased rapidly, made area for new construction. In the west the playing fields with trees and trees chopped down to make way for Blocks of flat and technopark. Frenton having more citizens so the hospital had been expended. School and library still maintained but the bank was demolished and replaced by new restaurant. In the east there were a lot of innovations. On the right hand side houses upgraded to be a new Block of flats, there were new flats in the east side near high street too. There were not any change for the cinema. But the coffe shop and park, shops had been cleared to make way for hotel and golf course, supermarket.

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some
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
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Frenton
 in 1990 and 2012.

Overall
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Frenton
 became modernization in 2012. The figures of trees decreased rapidly
, made area for You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlatedifferentstate-of-the-artmodernunusualunfamiliar
new
 construction.

In the west the playing fields with trees and trees chopped down to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 way for Blocks of flat and Possible spelling mistake found.techno park
technopark
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Frenton
 having more citizens This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 the hospital had been expended
. School and library still
 maintained This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 the bank was demolished
 and replaced by You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlatedifferentstate-of-the-artmodernunusualunfamiliar
new
 restaurant.

In the east there were This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
a lot of
 innovations. On the right hand side This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residences
houses
 upgraded to be a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlatedifferentstate-of-the-artmodernunusualunfamiliar
new
 Block of flats, there were You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlatedifferentstate-of-the-artmodernunusualunfamiliar
new
 flats in the east side near high street too. There were not any This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
 for the cinema. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
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coffe
 shop and park, shops had been cleared
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 way for hotel and golf course, supermarket. 