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Shopping for female before and after development

Shopping for female before and after development 70JdY
The shopping is the main thing in our live, every thing we need we have to go to shopping to get it. Our live dependent in the shopping, in the past the was complicated if We need to go to mall for shopping in the first need some body to take us there and stay with us, helping To holding the bags, fined parking, stay long time in mall to find our needs. But now every thing was changed totally and way of shopping increased like online shopping. Online shopping the most common in this time, the penevet of it, can make shopping from home no need to use a car, and buy it through visa alternative cache mony, more option and design size and Color. The best advantage for that type we can find every thing in one application.
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to take us there and stay with us, helping To holding the bags, fined parking, stay long time in mall to find our
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needs
.
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now
every thing was
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and way of
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increased like online
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. Online
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the most common in this time, the
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from home no
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a car, and
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, more option and design size and Color. The best advantage for that type we can find every thing in one application.

IELTS academic Shopping for female before and after development

Academic
  American English
1 paragraphs
140 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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