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sharing the household chores

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I will introduce about my family. My family has 6 people including: my grandparents, my parents, my younger brother and me. My family is founding that how difficult and hard it is to do all the housework so we usually splite the household chores equally. My grandparents reached retirement age. My father is the breadwinner in my house so his responsible for doing heavy lifting and makes money to support my family. My mother is an office worker and aslo a homemaker in my family. In the early morning everyday, she gets up early and shops for groceries. She always prepares dinner for our family when she gets off work. About me, I help my mother to lay the table for meals, sweep the house, clean the desk and iron the clothes. My brother assignec the same chores. Although doing household chores is very hard but it help me reduce stress after hard work. Doing housework is much easier if we do our share of housework willingly. We are very happy sharing the household chores equally.
I will introduce about my
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. My
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has 6
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including: my grandparents, my parents, my younger brother and me. My
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is founding that how difficult and
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it is to do all the housework
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usually
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the household
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equally
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My
grandparents reached retirement age.
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My
father is the breadwinner in my
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house
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so
his responsible for doing heavy lifting and
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makes
money to support my
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family
.
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My
mother is an office worker and
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aslo
a homemaker in my
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family
. In the early morning
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, she
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gets
up early and shops for groceries. She always prepares dinner for our
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when she
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gets
off work. About me, I
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help
my mother to lay the table for meals, sweep the
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house
, clean the desk and iron the clothes. My brother
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assignec
the same
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chores
. Although doing household
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is
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very
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hard
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it
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help
me
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reduce
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stress
after
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hard
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Doing housework is much easier if we do our share of housework
willingly
. We are
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happy sharing the household
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chores
equally
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IELTS academic sharing the household chores

Academic
  American English
2 paragraphs
176 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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