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The given line graph shows the difference in the number of house sales in the North East and West of the country

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The given line graph shows the difference in the number of house sales in the North East and West of the country the count of house sales is shown by the quarter in the first quarter with 45 sales the sales of the homes was highest in the east of the country followed by 30 sales in the west and…. e trend of sales remains the same the number of houses sold in the east but 48 best for 38 and north for 20: 08 in the third quarter we can see a significant rise in the sales in the north part of the country with about 90 sales the sales in the east and West were 47 and 35 respectively in the fourth quarter the sales of the houses in the north dips dramatically at it is at 20: 00 while the sales in the east and West region remain steady at 45 and 30 each in conclusion we can see that the third quarter proved to be a stark exception to the trend in the number of sales in the north region of the country
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IELTS academic The given line graph shows the difference in the number of house sales in the North East and West of the country

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