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self-employed or to work for a company

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Presently, many children in high school and in the university that are going to graduate are mostly thinking to do the entrepreneurs ship more than to work for a company or any organization, because I think to be an entrepreneur is obviously more freedom than be an employee in office. Moreover, the entrepreneur can fix or manage time much more comfortable than the office’s employee. So, I prefer to be self-employed. In this case, being what is not wrong not correct, it’s the personally choice. Everything has the different advantages and disadvantage. For the worker of the company, you will have the stable life, the financial remain stable, fix time, less risk about the carrier. On the other hand, you won’t have freedom same as self-employed, the finance grow difficult, and have to listen a boss. However, being the self-employed are not easy as you think. This job has to be creative, outstanding, unique, have self-confidence, and interested in the thing you do, which will bring the success to you, if you do well. Nowadays, people are judged by the society that you should have the great carrier, butter job, much income, and good person. So, this is one of the reasons why many people bring this problem to discuss in life sometime. In conclusion, “Do what you want” if that make you happy and can alive in this world by being the entrepreneur or the employee. Everything is suck, just kidding, but I would like to say that everything not good at all and also not bad as you think

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