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Rockingham transportation mode comparison

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In 2005, the pie chart pictures the largest percentage of the commuting method by workers was to drive a car by themselves at 50%. The next following major options besides driving a car alone were to join in communal transportation such as carpool and bus of 25% and 15%. The least options got some percentage at 5% were by foot and bicycle. There was a distinguishable percentage in 2015, in which Rockingham workers who preferred car and carpool as transportation mode dropped to 35% and 20%. However, there was a growing trend in bicycle and at-home workers numbers for 5% both. While the bus transportation percentage had no changes.

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