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Rift valley fever affected people in three countries

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The line graph compares three various countries in terms of the proportion of affected people by a particular disease in 1915. In general, the number of people who infected by rift valley fever in Brazil rose steadily, while the index for Japan and Mexico witnessed a significant decrease during the given period, with the latter country showing some mild fluctuations. People suffering from the disease in Brazil saw a sharp increase with the figure going up by 800 from 200 to 1000 almost for the first half of the period. Despite staying constant at 1000 for a month, the disease sufferers in the same country experienced a considerable growth to about 1500 by the end of the year. The proportion of people contracted the disease in Mexico fluctuated mildly over the given period, reaching a high of 1150 in April and falling to a low of about 425 in December. The same figure for the Japanese registered a noticeable reduction from 1500 to 180 throughout the year, although the figure maintaining the same level at 800 between May and July.

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