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Chart show percentage that make people unhealthy

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The chart illustrates average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which be unhealthy if eaten too much that from breakfast lunch dinner and snacks. Frist Sodium chart shows breakfast and snacks are maintain the same level at 14%as well as lunches increases from first meal of the day at 29% in dinner is the most sodium meals at 43%. Added sugar chart explains breakfast lowest at 16% and lunch climbs up from breakfast at 19% Moreover dinner increases from lunch at 23% the most of this chart is snacks at 42%. Saturated fat shows breakfast is the lowest in the chart at 16% as well as snacks rise from breakfast 5% the second of this chart is lunch at 26%, The most of this chart is dinner at 37%. In summary the meals that make people unhealthy is dinner also snacks Moreover breakfast is the lowest percentage around the chart.
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illustrates average percentages in typical
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meals
of three types of nutrients, all of which be unhealthy if eaten too much that from
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breakfast
lunch
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dinner
and snacks.

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of the day at 29% in
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is the most sodium
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at 43%.

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lowest at 16% and lunch climbs up from
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at 19%
Moreover
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dinner
increases from lunch at 23% the most of this
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is
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at 42%.

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is the lowest in the
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at 16%
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rise from
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5% the second of this
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is lunch at 26%, The most of this
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is
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at 37%.

In summary the
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that
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unhealthy is
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is the lowest percentage around the
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